Wednesday, February 4, 2026

Abecedarians

aren't my demitasse of oolong,
but I'll try one for kicks and giggles.

Calamity, my camerado close!
Draw me a little prince.
Enchanted to make your acquaintance,
fratello-Friend who always speaks my mind.

Guide me, O thou great Redeemer:
harbour and haven me.
I long for the day when I can be
juvenescent, jejune, jocular.

Keep me as the apple of your whatchamacallit.
Lavish graces upon a poor schlemazel,
miracles of atoning for which there are
no explanations, no linearities.

Oracle: oracular. Obstacle: obstacular.
Poet's privilege, to coin joy.

Quirkiness is my métier, my wheelhouse,
radical trash that I am ---
subversive, supple, seductive.

Thanatic winter yields to lively spring,
undoing death with
verdancy, vitality.

Welcome ruin as the herald of restoration.
X will forever mark the spot where
your kisses have devastated my wounds.

Zithers, dulcimers, hautboys, maracas, Peter Quince, the whole riotous shebang.

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by Thomas DeFreitas (b. 1969)

Wednesday, January 19, 2022

Zoe's Poetry Class II: A Possible Plan

Zoe and Alisha, hello!

I've been thinking about authors more than poems. I've been thinking of how to cast a wide cultural net. And I've been thinking about poems that will inspire discussion, not merely because I'm familiar with them, but because their imagery or idiom is fresh and exciting. Accordingly, here is a tentative syllabus of authors! (For some of them, I do have specific poems in mind.)

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Zoe's Poetry Class II
beginning February 2022

1: Seamus Heaney; Lucille Clifton; Gary Soto
2: William Blake; Emily Dickinson; Margaret Walker
3: Anna Swir; Ted Kooser or Jane Kenyon; Countee Cullen
4: Ayin Hillel; Hala Alyan; Bei Dao
5: Hilary Sallick? Jill McDonough? Christie Towers?
6: Lisa DeSiro; Tim Seibles; Dan Skwire

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We can credit my poetsister Hilary Sallick with suggesting Lucille Clifton's "The earth is a living thing" and Gary Soto's "Oranges" --- but I may use a different Soto poem.

And I think that three poems a week should more than suffice. Hoping my Basic Zoom account suffices to provide 60-75 minutes of "class time" since it'll be one-on-one. Or I might upgrade, and see if a poet I know (Hilary or Mary) could join us!

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All input from the two of you is OF COURSE welcomed --- and indeed sought!

peace and light
Tommy

Wednesday, February 24, 2021

My Toppings

 Zoe DeFreitas (b. 2011)

My oatmeal’s running away!

Oh no oh no! I think my blueberries are starting to decay!

This is bad, my raspberries have turn to clay!

My Snickers are thinner than Lay’s!

Please help me, I miss my toppings dearly.

Obviously it was the Food Snatchers, did I say it clearly?

Magical Books

Zoe DeFreitas (b. 2011)

My favorite magical books!

Please don’t outlook my magical books! They’re not for sale!

I hate getting offers for them in my magic mail!

I would never sell my magic books!

They help me get ready - I want to keep my magic looks!

Shopping

Zoe DeFreitas (b. 2011)

I love to shop!

I love to buy my mops!

I love to buy flip flops!

I love to buy decorative rocks!

I love to buy socks!

I’m not rather picky!

Rice And Beans

 Zoe DeFreitas (b. 2011)


Rice and beans!

Don’t you know what that means?

Rice and beans!

I want to keep my lawn clean.

Rice and beans!

Other places smell like smelly socks.

Rice and Beans!

Now come on down to

Rice and Beans!

Notes On Boats

 Zoe DeFreitas (b. 2011)



Notes On Boats!

Will they float?

I want to watch it on TV while eating my oats!

Notes On Boats!

Please grab the remote!

I would like to vote for

Notes On Boats!

Ah man, you lost the remote?

Grab my coat!

We’re going to buy a new remote!

So I can watch

Notes On Boats!

Clay On A Rampage

 Zoe DeFreitas (b. 2011)


Help!

My clay is on a rampage!

It’s locked me in a cage!

Ah! 

It smells like smelly socks in here.

I might be here for another 2 years!

My clay!

It’s clearly not okay.

It’s currently repeating

“You will pay, you will pay!”

 My cats are being louder than birds in the month of May!

Oh no!

My clay took my coffee!

I wish I had traded my magical clay for 3 pieces of magical toffee!

Things Are Not Normal

Zoe DeFreitas (b. 2011)


The ground’s running away from me!

The ceiling’s running a race 

The dog meowed

The squirrel plowed

Somehow, my sweater went to a noodle place named Kapow! 

How, how, things are not normal.

Next time I shouldn’t go to the mayor’s house, it’s anything but formal!

Sunday, May 24, 2020

the greedy the people

by E. E. Cummings (1894-1962)


the greedy the people
(as if as can yes)
they sell and they buy
and they die for because
though the bell in the steeple
says Why

the chary the wary
(as all as can each)
they don't and they do
and they turn to a which
though the moon in her glory
says Who

the busy the millions
(as you're as can i'm)
they flock and they flee
through a thunder of seem
though the stars in their silence
say Be

the cunning the craven
(as think as can feel)
they when and they how
and they live for until
though the sun in his heaven
says Now

the timid the tender
(as doubt as can trust)
they work and they pray
and they bow to a must
though the earth in her splendor
says May

Sunday, May 17, 2020

Morning Poem

by Mary Oliver (1935-2019)


Every morning
the world
is created.
Under the orange

sticks of the sun
the heaped
ashes of the night
turn into leaves again

and fasten themselves to the high branches—
and the ponds appear
like black cloth
on which are painted islands

of summer lilies.
If it is your nature
to be happy
you will swim away along the soft trails

for hours, your imagination
alighting everywhere.
And if your spirit
carries within it

the thorn
that is heavier than lead—
if it's all you can do
to keep on trudging—

there is still
somewhere deep within you
a beast shouting that the earth
is exactly what it wanted—

each pond with its blazing lilies
is a prayer heard and answered
lavishly,
every morning,

whether or not
you have ever dared to be happy,
whether or not
you have ever dared to pray.

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And here is a video of the poem being read by my friend Elena:


Friday, May 8, 2020

Psalm for Kingston

by Shara McCallum (b. 1972)


Text of the poem can be found here.

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And here is Shara McCallum reading "Psalm for Kingston," with a brief introduction.





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Things to think about:

This poem contains a lot of descriptions and phrases about the poet's early life in Kingston, Jamaica. Some of the proper names (Jack Mandora) might not be familiar; others (Bob Marley) probably will be!

There is a lot going on in this poem. I'd invite you to simply sit back and listen (or read), and take as much of it in as you can. Ask yourself: Would you like to live in Kingston? Are there good things or bad things going on in the city? Is it a calm place or a lively place? Is there friendliness or hostility, peace or menace, maybe all of the above?

From "Fern Hill"

by Dylan Thomas (1914-1953)


Now as I was young and easy under the apple boughs
About the lilting house and happy as the grass was green,
      The night above the dingle starry,
            Time let me hail and climb
      Golden in the heydays of his eyes,
And honoured among wagons I was prince of the apple towns
And once below a time I lordly had the trees and leaves
            Trail with daisies and barley
      Down the rivers of the windfall light.

And as I was green and carefree, famous among the barns
About the happy yard and singing as the farm was home,
      In the sun that is young once only,
            Time let me play and be
      Golden in the mercy of his means,
And green and golden I was huntsman and herdsman, the calves
Sang to my horn, the foxes on the hills barked clear and cold,
            And the sabbath rang slowly
      In the pebbles of the holy streams.

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Hear Dylan Thomas reading the whole poem:





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Things to think about:

I have to confess. The first time I read this poem, I didn't care for it. I didn't know what a "dingle" was, and that bothered me. "Golden in the heydays of his eyes" wasn't a phrase I could easily make sense of. And what's going on with being green and carefree?

But I discovered other poems by Dylan Thomas that I liked. And I learned that some of his poems are best listened to, as we might listen to a strange song or a piece of new music. We wait for what the poet can give us, and maybe we find something interesting!

When I was in high school, somebody asked me what it meant that "the sabbath rang slowly in the pebbles of the holy streams." It's a beautiful sentence, and I'd love to hear your ideas about it!

From Romeo and Juliet: Queen Mab

by William Shakespeare (1564-1616)


O, then I see Queen Mab hath been with you.
She is the fairies' midwife, and she comes
In shape no bigger than an agate stone
On the forefinger of an alderman,
Drawn with a team of little atomies
Over men's noses as they lie asleep;
Her wagon spokes made of long spinners' legs,
The cover, of the wings of grasshoppers;
Her traces, of the smallest spider web;
Her collars, of the moonshine's wat'ry beams;
Her whip, of cricket's bone; the lash, of film;
Her wagoner, a small grey-coated gnat,
Not half so big as a round little worm
Pricked from the lazy finger of a maid;
Her chariot is an empty hazelnut,
Made by the joiner squirrel or old grub,
Time out o' mind the fairies' coachmakers.
And in this state she gallops night by night
Through lovers' brains, and then they dream of love.

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Things to think about:

These lines are part of a longer speech by Mercutio, a friend of Romeo's in Shakespeare's play. Romeo has just told Mercutio that he had a dream, and Mercutio, perhaps judging from the way that Romeo is looking all starry-eyed, figures out that it's a dream of love.

Mercutio warns him that dreams can be very strange. He suggests that "the fairies' midwife," Queen Mab, is responsible for putting the strange images in our heads.

From Macbeth: The Three Weird Sisters' Chant

by William Shakespeare (1564-1616)


Double, double, toil and trouble;
Fire burn and cauldron bubble.
Fillet of a fenny snake,
In the cauldron boil and bake;
Eye of newt and toe of frog,
Wool of bat and tongue of dog,
Adder's fork and blind-worm's sting,
Lizard's leg and howlet's wing,
For a charm of powerful trouble,
Like a hell-broth boil and bubble.

Double, double, toil and trouble;
Fire burn and cauldron bubble!

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Things to think about:

The "weird sisters" in Macbeth are basically witches. Here, they are pronouncing some scary spell, and concocting a stew that I, for one, would not like to taste!

Still, I think that the "spell" is fun to say! Shakespeare knew how to make the language sing and charm and enchant his listeners.

Friday, May 1, 2020

Walk Sounds

by Bob Kaufman (1925-1986)


Soft noise, where crystalline sap dwells,
Tree bark houses, tree bark shoes.
Long green journeys, into sounds of death.
Cries of who blows, who blows, who blows,
Rings of raindrops, on damp streets.
Quietly disappearing, in fearmottled night,
Sweeping over asphalt mesas, to long gutters,
Where gray birds lie, gone time is buried,
Safe from hideous laughter, babblings,
Of sidewalk fools, tongues straining,
Flicking, on steps of air, nervously,
Glowing blue, black, blue, black,
In the shapes of night.

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Questions to think about: This is a poem of vivid imagination, and maybe a little disturbing. What does the poet see and hear? What is the mood of the poem? Can you write a poem about "walk sounds," maybe one much different from Bob Kaufman's? Could you write a daytime counterpart to Kaufman's nighttime poem?

One Boy Told Me

by Naomi Shihab Nye (b. 1952)


Text of the poem at Poetry Foundation.

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Naomi Shihab Nye reads (part of!) the poem.




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Question to think about: Has something a person said to you, or a part of a conversation you might have heard, struck you as suitable for a poem?

Poem 543

by Emily Dickinson (1830-1886)


I fear a Man of frugal Speech —
I fear a Silent Man —
Haranguer — I can overtake —
Or Babbler — entertain —

But He who weigheth — While the Rest —
Expend their furthest pound —
Of this Man — I am wary —
I fear that He is Grand —

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Note: A harangue is a long, sometimes angry or insistent speech, usually trying to persuade someone. Tirade is a similar word.

Question to think about: Why should the man of "frugal Speech" be feared more than the angry haranguer?

Poem 288

by Emily Dickinson (1830-1886)


I'm Nobody! Who are you?
Are you—Nobody—Too?
Then there's a pair of us!
Don't tell! they'd advertise—you know!

How dreary—to be—Somebody!
How public—like a Frog—
To tell one's name—the livelong June—
To an admiring Bog!

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Questions to think about: What's going on here? Why doesn't the "Nobody" who is speaking in the poem want to be "advertised"? Why is it "dreary to be Somebody"?

Friday, April 24, 2020

Coats

by Jane Kenyon (1947-1995)


I saw him leaving the hospital
with a woman's coat over his arm.
Clearly she would not need it.
The sunglasses he wore could not
conceal his wet face, his bafflement.

As if in mockery the day was fair,
and the air mild for December. All the same
he had zipped his own coat and tied
the hood under his chin, preparing
for irremediable cold.

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Questions to think about: Why won't the woman need the coat? Why is the cold described as "irremediable"? When you write a poem, can you write about a big event without mentioning the event itself?